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Gundam Wing Doujinshi “ Hakanakumo Togireru Hanashi ” Heero Relena AQUA Kajika

Gundam Scientists: I have done nothing wrong, ever, in my life.

Gundam Pilots: I know you’re lying, and I hate you.

One very common mistake among beginning writers is to write “Verbing, she verbed” when it would be better to write “She verbed and verbed.”

For instance, take this sentence:

Unlocking the door, she got into the car.

Taken at face value, this sentence tells you that she got into the car even though she was still in the process of unlocking it. That’s impossible. You need to unlock the door first, and only then can you get in the car  Here’s how that sentence should look instead:

She unlocked the door and got in the car.

Somebody said that this is nitpicking. You can see it that way, I suppose. But you can also see it as a choice between writing something else than what you meant to, or simply saying what you mean. And isn’t that choice fairly easy?

Heero: I asked Relena to share her queen size blanket.

Heero: To which she replied that she was a queen and therefore the blanket was already at max capacity.

Dorothy: Here’s a fun Christmas idea. We’ll hang mistletoe, but instead of kissing, you have to FIGHT whoever else is under it.

Relena: We are not doing that.

Dorothy: Mistlefoe™

Relena: Dorothy NO.

Teehee. Gundam memery.

ANYA TAYLOR-JOY 26th Annual Critics’ Choice Awards › March 7, 2021

“I’m BI, I’m HOMELESS, I have A GIANT WAR ROBOT, and I’m NEW IN TOWN.”

— Duo, crashing at Hilde’s place

1) Dear lord, this show has a problem with exposition, through both voice over and character dialogue.

2) Thinking the concepts “monarchy” and “pacifism” aren’t mutually exclusive is some naive bullshit if I’ve ever seen it

3) If more evidence of this naiveté is needed, please see the name “Peacecraft.”