Some loose ideas for the Madoka Magica Onimai fic
might spoil Madoka Magica and also it will escape the usual fluffyness and normal Agnst of onimai, Madoka Magica is very brutal so be warned
HomuMomiji is still friendly to everyone to an extent but still very frustrated because of how easy they die, she wouldnt become openly hostile unlike Homura because she had a previous relationship with all of them unlike the Homu
HomuMomiji becoming obsessed with MadoMahiro its more based on how Momiji got attached to Mahiro after just 2 encounters in the original story, than the way Homura did with Madoka
MadoMahiro needs to always make a wish, no Mihari drug, so she gets her new body thanks to her wish and instead becomes deaged so that Kyubey can harvest her emotional energy more easily, more unstable more easily one becomes a witch so making her go through puberty makes sense. So HomuMomiji's goal is to keep her alive mostly, which since Mahiro is less self sacrificial than Madoka, means to keep her from witching out that its 20 times more likely since Mahiro's own troubles.
No magia record because i know the bare minimum and i dont really like it that much, though some concepts i migh take
Mihari wont be a Magical Girl because she is smarter than that but she will be still very involved
Since the cast has less motives to be antagonistic to each other, the challenge of HomuMomiji its balancing the truth about the contract and Mahiro and Nayuta since they are the new members
Miyo would be the veteran magical girl and she gets confused as to why HomuMomiji suddenly became a magical girl withour kyubey (she also lives for the yuri of the magical girls she encounters while defending the city)
Miyo's yuritastic adventures
Aoi: So you are finally here Miyo
Miyo: Indeed, today we will learn which of us holds the absolute truth
Aoi: I will show you the power of BL and you will lose.
Miyo pins Aoi to a wall: Wouldnt you like to experience yuri before that ?
Aoi: !!!
And then Miyo wakes up from her dream
Miyo: ... hmph
The end...?
the way i'm already thinking of Idol Stuff easter eggs i could add to chapter 4 of the celestefic because of Chigusa replacing mr. Oshiro even though I'm only on writing chapter 2 (technically chapter 1 after the prologue)
thinking that idol stuff's Momiji is an aunt to Onimai Momiji and Chigusa mentions Tsurara in conversation and Momiji chimes in with "Oh, doesn't she work at the parfait place now?"
or Hisaki gets mentioned and Mahiro shudders as she remembers her first lingerie store visit "overly excited to do bra fitting..." kinda jokingly and Chigusa mentions Raika as Hisaki's girfriend poking fun at Momiji and Mahiro and they're both just awkwardly blushing off to the side
Mahiro building a gundam model kit
Momiji: Oh ? what are you up to Mahiro ?
Mahiro: Oh hey :D! im just building this gundam *Shows the box art*
Momiji: Oh thats so cool!! where are they from ?!?!?
Mahiro: Oh well its a show about mechas and its-
Momiji: Could we watch it?!?! um together >_<?
Mahiro thinking about a safe gundam show: uhhhh... OH! sure yeah! there is actually a new one that came out, it even has yuri!
Miyo appearing from behind Mahiro: YURI?!?!
Mahiro: WE-HUH?!?!?
Asahi and Nayuta aproach with curiosity at their sillyness
Mahiro (clueless): hehe well i guess we could watch it all together!
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Finishin season 1 of mercury witch
Mahiro: Um?
Miyo: *between shocked and excited*
Asahi: WOAHHHHH
Nayutan: Ooh thats gruesome
Momiji: 0_0
Lgbtq+
Mahiro: We need a group name
Nayuta: What for ?
Asahi: Because its cool!!!
Momiji: YEAHHH we need a cool name
Miyo: Maybe we could be called the 5 lillies?
Mahiro: ... any reason why?
Miyo: i like.....flowers
Mahiro: Right....
Mihari: You guys are the skittle's squad
Kaede: pfff, yeah i can see that honestly
Mahiro: Skittle's?
Nayuta: I think its because we are Lgbtq+
Mahiro: .... whats that ?
The whole group looks at Mahiro with confusion
Mahiro : w-what?
Kaede: She doesnt know ??!?!
Mihari: sigh... yeah that one is on me, i dont know why im suprised
Mihari develops the forcemasc drug
Mahiro: This is so cool!!! though i have a question
Mihari: mmh?
Mahiro: What would happen if i take both versions of the drug ?
Mihari: Your body takes a screenshot.
Mahiro: oh i see.... HUH ?!?!
Momiji and winning Mahiro over
Momiji: Nayutan... i need your help
Nayuta: yes ?
Momiji: How can i win Mahiro chan over ? you have a lot of information on us.. do you have any idea ?
Nayuta: Finally! i thought you would never ask
......
Momiji: Nayutan... it cant be that simple
Nayuta: Trust me Momiji, it is
......
Momiji: Hey Mahiro chan!
Mahiro: Yes ?
Momiji feeds Mahiro a cookie: Here!
Mahiro: Nom..nom? Momiji why the co-
Momiji scratches Mahiro's chin: hehe
Mahiro: purrrr purr... EEK!
Momiji: Oh my god-
Mahiro: YOU DIDNT HEAR ANYTHING
Momiji: Nayutan... was right!
Its kinda funny and also a bit sad that the first impression of onimai tends to be really bad because of how insane the plot is on paper and how normal it is for those kinds of plots to turn into a bit into the disgusting side, and yet the story its really freaking solid and despite some less than ideal jokes (that are at their worst on the anime mostly so if you are a manga reader it isnt bad enough to feel disgusted) the manga its really genuine and heart warming and the transgender coding being all over the story makes it just such a gem
Mahiro worrying of going to jail and feeling like a pervert when she isnt doing anything at all is real af but also realistically Mihari would be the one going to jail
Playing dnd
Nayuta: You see a lamia and-
Miyo: Can i?-
Nayuta: Roll for charisma.
Miyo rolls the dice: .....natural 20
Nayuta:........ you manage to charm and seduce the lamia and she allows you all to continue your journey
Miyo: Can she-
Nayuta: The lamia is too busy to go with you.
Miyo: Awwww
Mahiro: Miyo.... our party already has 15 extra members thanks to you.... its.. its not that big of a dea-
Momiji: I dont think that will work Mahiro..
Asahi: I CAST FIREBALL AT THE LAMIA
Miyo: WHAT!!?!?!
Nayuta: roll for an attack
Asahi: .... i got a 20!
Nayuta: she dies.
Miyo: NOOOOOOOO
Kaede: So Mihari, why does your brother doesnt visit, like at all ?
Mihari: Oh thats.... well-
Mahiro coming out of nowhere: We sold him.
Kaede and Mihari: Huh?!?!?
Mahiro: We sold him to science.
Kaede looks at Mihari
Mihari:... its... true
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