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Startinglineff

Who would ever think that starting fresh could ruin your life? A new beginning that you did not want. Original Chris Brown Fanfic

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startingline-ff
11 years ago

What's up chris daddy booty? I mean how you just going plan the boy future out for him. Nigga daughter just died, let him breathe. Other than that I loved it!

Exactlyy!! Thanks for reading :) Update tonight. 

startingline-ff
11 years ago

omgggggg yas im loving this fanfic rn i cant wait for another update!

Thanks so much. Updating tonight :)

startingline-ff
11 years ago

I am really loving this!

Thanks so much 

startingline-ff
11 years ago

That was a good chapter, whens the next one?

Todayy :) 2 Chapters!!

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Seems good ! Interesting and has me hooked

Thanks so much. Posting 2 more chapters today :)

startingline-ff
11 years ago

When are you updating?

Todayy :)

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Update

Updating 2 chapters todayy!!

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Update plz

Updating today!

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Chapter 1

Chris

Chapter 1

“Chris this will be your room. I know this transition might be hard for you, but I want you to get your life together while you’re here.” My father says while opening the door to the room.

“Babe , his daughter just passed. Let’s just let him get settled in & comfortable.” his wife, Victoria, says to him.

To be honest, I just want to chill right now. I want to think things through and try to get my shit together before anything else.

“Chris dinner will be done soon, be downstairs in 30 minutes.” My father says before walking out of my room.

I decided to unpack some of my shit to waste time. As I put my clothes in the drawers, I decided to turn my phone on for the first time since that day. Seeing the picture of Avaia on my lock screen gave me chills.

Flashback

“Chris you’ve been gone for two days! You can’t leave me and your daughter here whenever you want! Take care of responsibilities and-”

“I am taking care of my responsibilities Ma ! This is what I gotta do !”

“Daddy!! I missed you so muchh!” Avaia yelled running into my arms

One day she’ll see that I'm doing all this for her.

I hug her tight “ I missed you too babygirl. But you know I’ll always come back for you , right?”

She nodded her head and hugged me tighter.

“Look Ava, I got you something.” I tell her pulling the stuffed Minnie Mouse from my bag.

Her eyes lit up “ Thanks daddy! Im gonna keep her forever!’”

“Make sure you take care of her because next weekend we’re going to her house in Disney World. “

She screamed so loud , running all around the house.

I know I can’t make up for time we’ve lost but seeing that smile makes it all worth it.

“Chris… Chris come downstairs for dinner.” My father says interrupting my thoughts.

I sighed and nodded. Damn I miss my daughter. I unpack a picture of Avaia and put on my dresser before heading downstairs.

As I walked to the table, I see that my dad’s wife prepared chicken, collard greens, and macaroni and cheese.

It’s been awhile since I’ve had a home cooked meal. Momma always had late night shifts at the hospital, so I would just get fast-food for Avaia and I.

I piled my plate with food and started grubbin’.

“Boy put that fork down. We say grace first in this house.” My father said.

“Oh my bad.” I say apologizing.

“Gracious Lord, we thank you for the food we are about to receive for the nourishment of our bodies, in Jesus name, Amen.”  Victoria says.

We all say amen in unison before eating our food.

“So Chris, you know you’re not just going to sit around the house while you’re here right?” My father asked.

No shit.

I knew he was going to make me get a job or some shit while I’m here.

“You will be attending UCLA. I have connections, so I can get you in with no problem.” My dad says proudly.

The fuck? College life isn’t for me, I’m not doing this shit.

“Nah I’ll just find a job somewhere, the college boy thing isn’t for me-“

“No. If you’re going to live in this house, you’re going to school. And yes you will have a job. I own an auto shop, and you will work there when you’re not at school or studying.”

Wow, he just has my whole life planned for me.

“And what if I don’t want to do this?”

“Then you’ll be on the next flight back to Virginia. Look, your mother and I just want to do what’s best for you.”

“Think about Avaia, she would want you to do what’s best.” Victoria said.

After a few seconds of processing everything, I decided to go with my father’s plan.

“Fine. When do I start?”

“Registration starts tomorrow morning.”

I’m going to do this for Avaia. I want Avaia to be proud that her daddy went to college and is doing something positive for a change. I know she’s looking down on me wanting me to do what’s best.

I’m doing all of this for you baby girl.

Giselle

Chapter 1

“Ms.Basara , we’ve arrived at your destination. Would you like me to call your parents to let them know you’ve arrived safely.”

“No thanks.”

They probably don’t care anyways. I can’t believe they sent me here ”to become more well rounded”, I just wanted to take classes online and be done with it. I hate having to meet new people ,I always get judged for being wealthy and wanting nice things. That’s just me. The only good thing about this is that my boyfriend Ryan is here.

“Giselle, I know I’m only your chauffeur but I’ve known you since you were little. You’re an amazing young lady but you're very guarded. While you’re here , I want you to open up. You’re gonna do great I know it.”

John was more than just a chauffeur for me. When my parents were no where to be found he’d drive me around for hours until I fell asleep.

“Thanks so much John.” I say hugging him

We say our goodbyes and I walk to the registration office to get my classes. Walking around campus I can already see the bitches giving me side eyes. I hate jealous females. I just focus on where i’m going. All of sudden my book fly from hands and I almost fall.

“What the fuck?” I yell getting annoyed. Here we go already with people trying me.

“Oh shit, my bad.” the guy who bumped into em says while picking up my books. I stand over him waiting for him to hand them to me , I hope this nigga didn’t do it on purpose just to try to talk to me. I dont have time to hear any weak ass lines.   

“You good?” he asks and I finally get a good look him. I can’t lie , he is sexy af.

“Uh, yeah I-”

I couldn’t even get my words out.

“Giselle, is this nigga bothering you?” Ryan says coming  behind me.  

“No babe, he was just helping me out.” I say staring into the stranger’s eyes.

“Aight nigga, she don’t need your help no more. You can leave.” Ryan says.

“Ryan don’t be rude,  he-”

“Nah , it’s all good” he says walking away.

I don’t know what it is about him, but for some reason I was wishing I could see him again.  


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startingline-ff
11 years ago

this is great but omg poor Chrissypooh :'( when do you update ?

Updating in a hour!

startingline-ff
11 years ago

this is awesome. I don't really see cb in a romantic way so I don't usually read his ff but this might change my mind. You got talent.

Awww thank youuuuuu!

This Is Awesome. I Don't Really See Cb In A Romantic Way So I Don't Usually Read His Ff But This Might
startingline-ff
11 years ago

omg that was soo sad! but it was really good :) I cant wait for the rest

Thanks for reading :) Chapter 1 will be up tonight!

startingline-ff
11 years ago

I feel terrible for Chris...but I love the plot!

Thanks babe 😊

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Oh my, that was a sad beginning but I'm totally looking forward to the rest of this. I can't believe they even took it to that level of extreme. There was no need for them to take that child's life, just uncalled for. He seemed like a great father and all he wanted to do was do right by his daughter. I don't know what's gonna come out of this move to LA but I'm hoping its nothing but good. Can't wait for chapter one.

Chris was an amazing father, he would do anything for Avaia. Hopefully the move to Cali will be good for him

startingline-ff
11 years ago

why they do that to the baby girl she was innocent and so beautiful chris was just trying to get away i feel so bad for chris :'(

Yeah Chris is going through a lot right now. 

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Poor lil baby got shot :(

I knowwwww :(((

startingline-ff
11 years ago

This is so sad, the baby didn't have to die like that I literally teared up reading this and now im sad and that is gonna effect my school day,but Im looking forward to this story cant wait

Awww don't be sad &&& thanks for reading babe

startingline-ff
11 years ago

BTW, I'm the writer for Nothing's But A Bitch, this is just my main blog. I didn't want you to think I didn't read it.

Okay!

startingline-ff
11 years ago

I shed a tear for little Avaia. She didn't deserve to die like that, all Chris wanted to do was give her a better life. I loved it, I really did I can't wait for more :)

Thanks so much for reading 😊😊 Chapter One is coming soon

startingline-ff
11 years ago

I'm loving this already, got a new reader. Great start :)

Thanks so much for the support 😊😊

startingline-ff
11 years ago

I like it so far! Can't wait to see what the outcome of him moving to Cali will be.

Thanks for reading babe 😊

startingline-ff
11 years ago

That's sad he lost his daughter they took it too far!!

I knoww. It sucks Chris had to go through that 😩.

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Chris

Chris

" Avaia, I told you to put your shoes on five minutes ago. What are you doing?"

" Daddy , I don’t want to move. Who’s gonna play with grandma?"

I could never stay mad at a face like that. She melts my heart everytime she talks. She’s the reason I’m doing all of this.

...

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Finally a fanfic with Nazanin :) Thank the lord 😂🙏🙌

Yasss she's so gorggggg. I never see any fanfics with her so we decided to use her as the main. 

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Love this already

❤️❤️ thanks so much

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Awww that was sad :( cant wait for chaoter 1 tho

Chapter 1 will be up tomorrow babe

startingline-ff
11 years ago

how old is Chris in this ff

Chris is 22 

startingline-ff
11 years ago

I sent my feedback twice because Tumblr be on some other.

Lmao okay. 

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Omg. How can you do this to me? That tugged on my heartstrings. I almost shed some tears no lie. Being a drug dealer there's never an easy way out now look what happened. I can't believe how stupid the guy was to shoot open fire while his daughter was outside. Ugh! I hope moving with his father would help him change his life around. I mean he already loss his girlfriend and now his daughter. This should def be a wake up call. I like it so far babe :)

Yeah hopefully Chris will change for good when he moves to Cali. Thanks soooo much for reading boo!

startingline-ff
11 years ago

Super excited for this :)

Me too! Thanks so much !

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