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yudzukii

1 month ago

& Space

Some might see me as a key

Some might feel me deeply

Some might see me as the door

Some might meet my core

Some might perceive my essence

Some might hear my soul

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janimay-sprout-cloud

7 months ago

✧˚ · . Made a comic based on my feelings and art experience

It's a 4 page comic about criticism. There are two entities representing the inner voice (more details in the previous post). One can be call Logical Me and the other Emotional Me.

Logical Me says, "I've done a great job! Let's see what a professional will say. I think my artwork is wonderful. But I want to make it even better! So I'm ready for criticism."

Emotional Me nods actively.

They approach the professional and give them their artwork.

Professional says, "So what do we have here... Everything's good in the beginning, but soon becomes a mess. Try to do this and this to make the idea clearer."

"Oh, I didn't even think about that," Logical Me replies .

Professionals continues, "You haven't done ENOUGH with this part. I understand that you're still learning, but in the professional world you would've been fired."

"Yes, you right," says Logical Me.

"This part got worse. You shouldn't have changed anything here," professional adds.

"Right, right," response Logical.

"But don't think it was all in vain. There are a lot of good ideas here, and now you know what you shouldn't do," says professional with a little worry on their face.

"Yeah, sure, i get it." Logical answers calmly.

Professional continues with a growing concern, "And I'm saying all this not because I dislike your artwork, but because I wanna help to improve it."

Confused Logical tries to reassure them, "Of course. Everything you said is fair enough why are you..?'

Professional looks away nervously.

Logical Me terns to the right.

And sees Emotional Me ready to cry.

Emotional sobs and looks down.

Logical expresses complex emotions without words.

To figures stand holding hands. Together they are inner self.

The one on the left greets you with a smile. Her name is Rational. She's the one who does most of the talking, thus she doesn't have eyes. She's responsible for the body's well-beeng and for communication with the outside world. That's why she looks transparent and hollow like a glass.

The one on the right is lookin at you with curiosity. Their name is Emotional. They is the one who does most of the watching, thus they doesn't have mouth. They carries ideals and dreams, thinks outside of the box and fills live with meaning. That's why they looks full of light. Their head is shaped like a cloud with a sprout on top.

Each of them have a nose and only one ear. They also can switch eyes and mouth, but one can't have both at the same time.